neva_black_n_white Posted July 3, 2004 Share Posted July 3, 2004 No Name you scream with passion glare with delight, you watch these emotions combust tonight sit me down and watched me weep theres nothing else to gain - as the blood drains to my feet what do you want? why are you there? youve known me so long but all you do is stare there are no words but silence has spoken a living reality cannot be broken when nightmares are visions and dreams are a hope it hurts to see that what we are - can never elope what is that you want from me? -------------------------------------------------------------- pretty odd i know, but just what i felt today...im going out now, so see you guys around. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 4, 2004 Share Posted July 4, 2004 I really enjoyed your poem.It was written well.Good work Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 20, 2004 Author Share Posted July 20, 2004 hey, i just wanted to say thanks for what you said, i was in greece a couple of days ago so i came on to check out my old posts, and well i appreciate what you had to say, thankyou. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 Hey Kel, What a great peom I loved it. 8) Keep up the good work. Hubman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 very original! i love it! -ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 20, 2004 Author Share Posted July 20, 2004 thanks hubman and ness, im glad you both appreciated it, and it was nice what you both had to say, thanks again. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 No prob.I liked your poem alot b/c i could relate to it.Keep writing u r a great poet. Meagan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 21, 2004 Author Share Posted July 21, 2004 icall myself a poem only the only time i feel i can write is when i literally do combust with some form of emotion, i seem to bottle up emotions that i can only handle at a minimum and when i reach breaking point i release or more so vent through words to attempt to control everything. im glad you could relate because its nice to see that some do, but at the same time i dont know if thats a positive thing, i guess my emotions will decide when i next write, but ill keep you all posted! kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted July 23, 2004 Share Posted July 23, 2004 GREAT POEM!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 24, 2004 Author Share Posted July 24, 2004 thanks....ive written another so ill show you, ill post it up later, sorry for how it is but i dont change the way i feel when i write so if the grammar doesnt fit, its free style and my emotions at that minute, thanks everyone, Kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaiva Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 Great poem. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Jaiva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 27, 2004 Author Share Posted July 27, 2004 Thankyou for your responce, im glad you showed an interest in my work, ill have to post some up some time but i have to have some form of motion to motivate me first, thankyou. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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