Cheap and easy Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 A reason being, the reasoning been. a world too far to take the glee that would ravage who shouldnt see. The life i lead is to cease. saviour to those i rest my piece and leave the ones i hurt too free here i am alone again to find myself apathetic played a song for those who know the game so lay me down and know no name the ballard of the one in pain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkweed Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 That's a great poem. I don't understand why nobody else posted their thoughts... Well, I like your use of rhythm. Great job =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 i agree with the above poster.That was a great poem.You are a great writer. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallingisfun Posted August 5, 2004 Share Posted August 5, 2004 I think this is great. Good form, great content, you stayed away from cliches, and still got a great point accross. Wonderful poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 i like it. these are my favorite lines: and leave the ones i hurt too free here i am alone again Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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