brtlangst Posted June 27, 2004 Share Posted June 27, 2004 Slightly empowering Your voice it seems, Twisting slowly Course of action…I can't withhold Broken shards of glass Casting a forlorn expression I've bled my heart away But the pulse still remains The scars sealing, Passages to my soul I can only cut so much Of this pain away It doesn't seem.. complete yet...like I have more to say but I can't put it into words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roasted Carrots Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 I like what you have so far...especially the title. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brtlangst Posted June 28, 2004 Author Share Posted June 28, 2004 Thank you Roasted Carrots Don't you agree that there is still more that could be done to the poem? And you should submit some of your stuff! ^^ Your Friend, Amie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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