Jakeisconfused Posted June 24, 2004 Share Posted June 24, 2004 I lie here numb and wait for feeling I don't know what to think or what to say I'm paralized from all the emotions I'm just a kid But I can tell you Pain Like being stabbed in the back by a best friend Pain Like having no friends to BE stabbed in the back by Pain All these feelings hard to explain Pain I look happy to you but saddness builds up inside Pain Two people in this brain the first called minipulation the second name is.... Pain I can't explain this any better Pain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted June 24, 2004 Share Posted June 24, 2004 nice poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted June 24, 2004 Share Posted June 24, 2004 Great poem Jake!!!! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted June 25, 2004 Share Posted June 25, 2004 I love that poem. It says so much in so little. It spoke to me so much it was like you were writing it, inside my head.... ~Under~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarahmaria Posted June 25, 2004 Share Posted June 25, 2004 this is a really great poem... everyone can relate to it, everyone goes through this at some point of time... i know i did... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 27, 2004 Share Posted June 27, 2004 thats something i could have once lived also well experianced, i enjoyed reading it, because you seemed to show the hurt others experiances but the gifts they had to experiance it, if that makes sense at all? almost like a treasuring of others experiances because nothing in your life could come near so thereforeeee those who take for granted actually have the world at their feet they just dont see it. anyway, unique poem, kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted June 27, 2004 Share Posted June 27, 2004 neva_black_n_white--It makes since...I totally understand and agree with you! Hey SarahMaria-where'd you get your picture? With the girl sitting there? lol, just wondering-its cute ~Under~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarahmaria Posted June 27, 2004 Share Posted June 27, 2004 hey totally unrelated to the whole topic, but lol, its from link removed... looks like the angel might have com from there as well...am glad u like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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