ang3l2004 Posted June 23, 2004 Share Posted June 23, 2004 Silence What do I have to do to make you hear, Make you feel what it is that I fear Happiness Everyone says you need to be happy and smile, But does everyone know I have pretended for awhile. fear Im scared half to death to let you go, To make a mistake then I will never know. tears Do you all see them slowly coming from my eyes, Do you all hear all these screams and cries. alone Im not alone remember I have me, But what if I told you this is not what I want to be Goodbye You say goodbye and leave me here, Alone in the silence,without happiness,filled with fear Quick poem tell me what you think By me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sadness_Creeping Posted June 23, 2004 Share Posted June 23, 2004 =D> very very nice...i like it soo much....goood job!!!! -Sadness_Creeping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted June 23, 2004 Author Share Posted June 23, 2004 thanks alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted June 23, 2004 Share Posted June 23, 2004 Great job Ang3l that was a GREAT POEM *Applause* I loved it alot!!!!!!! Keep up the wonderful work!!! I am a big fan of your poetry!! Hubman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted June 25, 2004 Share Posted June 25, 2004 That was AWESOME!!!! I could never produce anything like that. ~Under~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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