dpressedone89 Posted June 23, 2004 Share Posted June 23, 2004 Dying Icarus falling down from the sky and rising from the ashes dusting off and carrying on survivng battles and clashes shot down in flames causes by melted wings your picture i hold in my soul my spirits lifts and my heart sings the pain of letdown can never compare to the pain of numbness before your love was there dying icarus reaching for dreams never give up things arent always what they seem -stitches any oppinions please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sisterlynch Posted June 23, 2004 Share Posted June 23, 2004 Join a rock band and make a million dollars!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted June 23, 2004 Share Posted June 23, 2004 Very well versed. I liked it very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted June 23, 2004 Share Posted June 23, 2004 I liked it alot nice poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 24, 2004 Share Posted June 24, 2004 i liked it, it seemed to give a lot of hope and will power, i thought you writ soemthign truley empowering, well you made me smile anyway. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted June 25, 2004 Share Posted June 25, 2004 you are a great writer and your poetry really speaks to me and sometimes when i cant put what i feel into words you do it for me threw yer poetry ~Under~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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