ang3l2004 Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 In my life I have went through many storms many cloudy days, Not searching within myself but looking for other peoples ways. I have thought about it long and hard on what I should do, I now need to worry about me and stop thinking of you. When I shed all those tears are u there to wipe them away, No I am here alone each and everyday. I am the only one that can make me happy within, There is enough stuff inside of me it dont need an extra spin. So I need to be happy but do it just for me, So when you say you love me truth is what I see. Right now im miserable and holding on so tight, But as you can see when im alone you are out of sight. I have done so much crying and felt so much pain, But if I think about it I can overcome this and gain. Even though its hard for me to look at myself and be glad, Glad that I have a life even if its sad. So anyone who is not happy look up above, Look within yourself then you will truly find and feel love. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1Adam12 Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 Beautifuly written ang3l Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Mix Maxster Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 great poem, you've inspired me to write one now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted June 11, 2004 Author Share Posted June 11, 2004 thanks lol! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 Good writin' ang3l! ~Under~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 Ang3l2004, What a beatiful poem... With a lot of pure emotions reflected in it. Keep the writing going you have a talent for putting your emotions into words. Great job very moving... Hubman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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