lil_unique_me Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 i gave you life, to take it away i gave you freedom, to cage you i gave you love, to steal it from you my sweet child, i loved you so you will never know how much to lose you almost killed me i would have loved to watch you grow i wanted you to live, to love to grow and respect i loved you child why did you have to die???? im on my way to join you i cant live without you the scarlet billows around me my life is spread out before my eyes i breath my last breath im here for you my love Catie xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted June 10, 2004 Share Posted June 10, 2004 HOLY COW!!! What a depressing and sad peom. Very moving... Yikes! Don't get me wrong it was a good but, gloomy!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lil_unique_me Posted June 11, 2004 Author Share Posted June 11, 2004 lol. thanks. gloomy is my speciality. it was written about a mother who lost her kid to cot death but i havnt experienced it at all. i jsut had a feeling to write it. Catie xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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