Silent Man Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 rejection everyday the same everyday the pain picking away at my soul never good enough never tough enough to compete with anyone and you you dictate my life everystep of the way i cant think for myself are you proud of yourself? isolation living in a dream somewhere inbetween real life and fantasy cant tell whats real this pain that i feel emptiness inside of me and you you believed all the lies and you kept them inside and you followed the rest loss of self respect addiction take away my pain make me feel sane open my mind take a little trip it wont hurt a bit and let me take control and you with you I had finally found a way to escape from my life but i paid the price despiration tired of being alone desperate for a soul who could give me the strength i need i was down on myself and i needed some help someone who'd believe and you your tyin me down and holdin me back i succumb to your ways of life and i still dont suffice inspiration i finally let go this pain that i've known i'm ready to move on gambling on fate the feeling was great my time had finally come then you you gave me your heart and your soul and made me glad to be me i've escaped from misery Link to comment
amaranth_04 Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 Nice ones, Silent Man. I like the way you've arranged them in themes. Hope the order is true and you're at the last one. Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 very talented you must read my poems lol You are very good Link to comment
Dreng3333 Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 Those are excellent, very well written and arranged. Link to comment
Silent Man Posted June 9, 2004 Author Share Posted June 9, 2004 Nice ones, Silent Man. I like the way you've arranged them in themes. Hope the order is true and you're at the last one. Yes it is Link to comment
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