Silent Man Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 today is the day my life will change an unknown road lay ahead will my life remain whole with you by my side ...or will i walk alone something tells me i'm on my own when will you finally realize you cannot run for the rest of your life you need my love and i'm right here so please come home love, please don't run your gettting tired hope, i can change your life but theres a catch commitment, you have to help me with you my life was whole too many years i spent alone but i cant carry us on my own so please come home you deserve the world but you will never believe it your mind is set, your familiar with the pain afraid to be reborn so run, you've made it this far deny your chance for a new life and wake up from this dream of stability Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 Beautiful poem I really like it,When you get a chance right somemore you are very talented Link to comment
Raiders79 Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 Well im no poetry expert.. in fact i hate writing and reading and everything like that but i loved this poem... it really hit home for me... GREAT JOB!!!! keep it up i look forward to hearing more from you. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 yeah, i really liked your work, i thuoght it was empowering, emotional but empowering, but i did enjoy reading the poem. kel Link to comment
heartbroken_f Posted June 7, 2004 Share Posted June 7, 2004 WOW. That was one excellent poem. I loved it!!! Keep them coming... Link to comment
Silent Man Posted June 8, 2004 Author Share Posted June 8, 2004 Thanks everyone for the compliments. ang3l2004 I've seen you respond to every one of my poems and I really appreciate it, thank you. Link to comment
amaranth_04 Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 Hi there, enjoyed reading another poem of yours. Still like words to a song.. ok no country-pop.. Link to comment
Silent Man Posted June 8, 2004 Author Share Posted June 8, 2004 Hey amaranth_04 how are you? That's great this one doesn't fit country-pop, I was worried that I might have had to switch to country music lol. Link to comment
amaranth_04 Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 Going good, thnx. Pity I threw away my book of poems, or I'd have some to add here. Then again, maybe not verses from when I was 12 eh.. Link to comment
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