ionno Posted January 20, 2010 Share Posted January 20, 2010 Your Hand In Mine Indie Folk Broken and torn That’s what we are Each time we talk A battlefield A warzone Ground zero for the Dropped atomic bomb Wastelands dominate the spaces Between our thoughts Nothing can make it through Alive We mistreat each other I know someone else would love me better But for some strange reason All I want is Your hand In mine After about 5 minutes of brainstorming, this is what I have come up with so far. It fits into an album I've been writing about a failing relationship that is strained by the unexpected addition of a child to the family. When I first thought of the concept, I had been listening heavily to Tallahassee by The Mountain Goats and somewhat mirrors it in a way, I guess. Also, there isn't any real melody or tune to the song yet, so that's why there's no real discernible structure in certain cases, the last lines are most likely going to form the chorus. I just felt somewhat proud of myself because the beginnings of it turned out better than expected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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