Silent Man Posted May 19, 2004 Share Posted May 19, 2004 being loved was never a problem, he was cared for his since the day he was born, he was never alone, but how he was lonely, he could not carry on. life had set in and he wasnt ready, unprepared for the trials and heartache, it was too much to handle the future looked dim, he couldnt stand the life that was his. a great man once said "if i die tomorrow id be alright because i believe that after were gone the spirit carries on" he cherished those words but soon realized that the pain is reserved for those left behind he hated this thought cause now he could see how his loved ones would suffer if he were to leave so he made up his mind to spare them the pain sacrificing his own sanity he would weather the storm at least for today in hope of a better tomorrow if the day ever comes when the pain is no more and hes finally at peace with himself it will all be over but then he would see how his loved ones would suffer if he were to leave Link to comment
Bubba_p Posted May 19, 2004 Share Posted May 19, 2004 That was crazy good man. amazing makes you really think about stuff in another way. =D> =D> Link to comment
Silent Man Posted May 19, 2004 Author Share Posted May 19, 2004 Cool man, I appreciate the compliments. Link to comment
amaranth_04 Posted June 3, 2004 Share Posted June 3, 2004 Hi there, Good one. It's nice to have someone to live for, and with.... sometimes hard to do it just for one's self, but more enduring.. Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted June 3, 2004 Share Posted June 3, 2004 beautiful poem I really liked it Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted June 4, 2004 Share Posted June 4, 2004 I enjoyed it. I mean...if you go to the suicide forum a lot of people say they have nothing to live for. They need to read that...because even though we think our loved ones don't care...deep down they do. They might yell, scream, and curse but they do. I wish everyone would read this..it'll help you out I know that much. Thanks for sharing it with us. It was really good. ~Under~ Link to comment
Silent Man Posted June 5, 2004 Author Share Posted June 5, 2004 I enjoyed it. I mean...if you go to the suicide forum a lot of people say they have nothing to live for. They need to read that... Yea that's what I thought so I posted it in the 'Suicide Forum', Got deleted for double posting And thanks everyone for the comments. I have a few more I may post. Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 I like it and understand where you're coming from. EmptySoul Link to comment
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