idontakre6203 Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 It's just a simple play on words. I'm not sure what I intend to tell here. Above all, I'm looking for a cleaner ending ha. Any Ideas friends? Should I expand or would I exhaust the concept? These eyes they see the things I saw, The things I see, these eyes, they saw. The mind I own, thought's think it knows, It thinks the thoughts I mind, you know, If ever thinks these balls that hang, Don't shoot your men a'midst a bang. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue_dahlia Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 It's just a simple play on words. I'm not sure what I intend to tell here. Above all, I'm looking for a cleaner ending ha. Any Ideas friends? Should I expand or would I exhaust the concept? These eyes they see the things I saw, The things I see, these eyes, they saw. The mind I own, thought's think it knows, It thinks the thoughts I mind, you know, If ever thinks these balls that hang, Don't shoot your men a'midst a bang. My ears they hear sounds amidst, The sounds that fill my ears are solace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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