waveseer Posted December 22, 2009 Share Posted December 22, 2009 both of us made promises we wanted to keep but both of us broke them wanting to weep both of us made declarations of how much we cared but both of us acted like we were scared both of us made the other one happy but both of us treated the other one crappy both of us felt some very strong feelings but both of us from them were caught reeling both of us gave it our best shot but both of us jumped when the fire got too hot both of us intended to learn from the other but both of us realized together we'd smother both of us wished for a different ending but both of us were relieved of pretending both of us made a choice to let go but both of us have used the experience to grow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazyaboutdogs Posted December 22, 2009 Share Posted December 22, 2009 Oh wow! That's very clever with the use of rhymes! Nicely done! I wish I could rep you for this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waveseer Posted December 22, 2009 Author Share Posted December 22, 2009 Thanks, CrazyAD, I'm so glad someone else enjoys the stuff that spills out of my head. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spondence Posted December 22, 2009 Share Posted December 22, 2009 both of us made promises we wanted to keep but both of us broke them wanting to weep both of us made declarations of how much we cared but both of us acted like we were scared both of us made the other one happy but both of us treated the other one crappy both of us felt some very strong feelings but both of us from them were caught reeling both of us gave it our best shot but both of us jumped when the fire got too hot both of us intended to learn from the other but both of us realized together we'd smother both of us wished for a different ending but both of us were relieved of pretending both of us made a choice to let go but both of us have used the experience to grow I really enjoyed this waveseer, thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waveseer Posted December 23, 2009 Author Share Posted December 23, 2009 I really enjoyed this waveseer, thank you. You're welcome, Spondence, once I got over my fear of criticism and started posting poems as they come life got better for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingray Posted December 23, 2009 Share Posted December 23, 2009 Amazing poem! Does it help you heal personally? And how do you go about writing these poems? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waveseer Posted December 23, 2009 Author Share Posted December 23, 2009 Amazing poem! Does it help you heal personally? And how do you go about writing these poems? It does help me heal, very much I think. Sometimes I am releasing emotion, sometimes it's a chronicle, and others a memory. They just ooze out as I type them. I've learned not to edit, merely submit. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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