Burdening pain

[Sebulous]

PRELUDE: So me and my girl got caught sneaking out. Her parents are upset with me. I heard the next day from her that her dad, a cop whom knew nothing of me really, said I handled myself well (used yes sir, no sir, yes ma'm, no ma'm). Her parents are getting an hour massage thingie as a suck up gift. (was orginally for her mom as Mom's day gift).

 

I want to write her mom a letter but not sure what to say. included in the letter is the free 2 hour massage (to be split with her and husband). What should I say???

 

 

The following poem is going to my GF.

 

Burdening Pain

 

I'm sorry to burden you

with all this pain.

I thought that we

had much to gain.

 

Every waking moment,

I'm thinking about you.

I remember good times,

and things we used to do.

 

The movies, walks, parks,

and other things we'd embark.

As well as all the rest,

I remember this the best.

 

Lucious lips and enthralling eyes,

no wonder why I couldn't tell lies.

Cute dimples and tasty hair, (inside joke, see bottom)

To hurt you? I'd never dare.

 

We faced many troubles

where most love's die.

Stuck it through it all,

and kept it alive.

 

We couldn't stop seeing the other

got caught by your father and mother.

We've lost your families sacred trust.

all this from just a quick lust.

 

Now we face another test,

please don't lay us to rest.

why quit on you and me?

We can work this out Dee.

 

I see no reason to slow to a stop,

I fear not your dad nor a cop.

There has been one thing learned,

"you play with fire, you get burned"

 

I'm sorry to burden you

with all this pain.

I thought that we

had much to gain.

 

 

(( about the tasty hair. One time we were in a park and the wind was blowing her hair in my mouth. Comically I said "mmm taste like Suave" She busted out laughing saying "I do use Suave". I smacked my lips and asked if it was the deep conditioning stuff and she started laughing even more and nodding her head. So ya, thats funny ^_^))

[Caldus]

Good poem. I don't like the whole consistent rhyming scheme in poems, but the content of it is great!