Anonymos Posted October 30, 2009 Share Posted October 30, 2009 You put a smile on my face until you said you were leaving you seemed so careless and gave me NO reasons To tell me you need space is basically telling me we're over don't give me those lies give me some damn closure! Some time will pass and you'll realize what your missin' Then i want u to come back and realize wat your NOT gettin' I've learned what you have done and you know i don't like to share so we can never have a solid realtionship as i'd prefer both people to care I am not being hateful in fact i dont hate you one bit for you have taught me a life lesson i won't ever stand for this S ** T !!! I love to write poems and this is my first time posting one here..I actually just wrote this specially for ENA!! I can't think of a title i want to give it...any suggestions would be nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greedy Toad Posted October 30, 2009 Share Posted October 30, 2009 Thanks for sharing As for a title, not sure, doesn't need one really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymos Posted October 30, 2009 Author Share Posted October 30, 2009 Thanks, Yeah i guess Its self-explanatory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
g84 Posted October 30, 2009 Share Posted October 30, 2009 hi, i picture a title like "Closing the door", something similar to that. : ] I'm not sure if that's a good suggestion, but it's what came to mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymos Posted October 30, 2009 Author Share Posted October 30, 2009 That is a great suggestion...thats def. whats happening in this poem. Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DadaJones Posted October 30, 2009 Share Posted October 30, 2009 How about " Closing the A-B Rhyme Scheme", this way you make it alittle ironic too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymos Posted October 30, 2009 Author Share Posted October 30, 2009 Hahhaha..i love ironies......&& Thanks, I like it too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonasWaingaro Posted October 31, 2009 Share Posted October 31, 2009 Like the poem. Can't think of a title really, maybe 'space is for astronauts, not relationships!' hehe Just how I feel these days, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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