tainted_soul Posted April 29, 2004 Share Posted April 29, 2004 "nothing" something, something my eyes are numb and silence stumbles on waiting for the car in a silent, sheering rain stand back from the corner don't get sucked into the drain nothing, nothing waiting off the corner for a bus that never came scratching my umbrella wipe away the pain buildings' blank stares behind the rain something, something the building on my back going up to nowhere endlessly building on black nobody's coming where is this place how long have i been waiting there's nothing, nothing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woobiegirl Posted April 29, 2004 Share Posted April 29, 2004 I went back to see if you had others. Have you ever published any of your writings? What a creative way to express yourself! Looking forward to reading more, Woobiegirl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted April 30, 2004 Share Posted April 30, 2004 I loved your poem it is really heart felt. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tainted_soul Posted April 30, 2004 Author Share Posted April 30, 2004 thanks. and no, i've never published anything, though i've thought about it (i can't just put them on here, a lot of mine would get deleted for the language). i'd like to publish something eventually, but i don't really consider poems of any real importance (not enough for publishing). They're simply an easy way to express myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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