REis EyeS Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 F*** this roller coaster ride! My eyes can't take it anymore. The chemicals inside - Spill intoxicating thoughts and feelings; All around I'm dying yet again. When it all seemed close to perfection; You steal it from me, greedy hands of yours. Wash your hands clean, coz my blood ain't worth - Boasting... no it won't win you a trophy. Come one, come all... the freak show has arrived! Her heart - defrosted way too many times. A moaning inner child all life-deprived. Do lock yourself indoors; Use agoraphobic excuses. Never harm another of her kind, Or what she had been once. Leave it all behind; They're better off without. Can't hide it any longer; An unkempt room in her head. She's drained the time from others; Sure wish that she was dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 i really liked your poem it had alot of poem and seemed to have good speed when reading it allowed, its like one of those questions ''how does a heart heal after being beaten so many times'' it seems in this poem that the heart has finally died or at least the will to see through any life experiances. i liked its power. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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