Divine_Malice Posted July 21, 2009 Share Posted July 21, 2009 Every time I close my eyes, your past comes alive. Every girl you've ever kissed, and the passion that you did. It all dances in my head. I lock it deep in side my mind, Hoping to never think of it again. The lines that you crossed, with no shame in your eyes. It all dances in my head. I have been hurt before, so excuse me if I cry. As my heart trembles in side, In fear that our love will die. When will this end, i am getting dizzy from all the dancing in my head. Rough draft, what do you think? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mar1e Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 wow, that is an awesome draft, I can relate to it for sure. keep it going, I know it will get even deeper! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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