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what do you think of this poem?


treehouse7888

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Be honest and tell me if its ok.

 

 

Somewhere there will be answers

Somewhere there will be people

dancing in the back of your mind.

Some of them will be deceitful,

Some of them will be coming in

But none of them are eager, to be unwind.

 

Again there will be Jesus

the one who's done it then

the one who taught people to look and define.

There reflection will be deeper

There soul will be away from them

No one will be a keeper

Just a bomb with less time.

 

The clouds will be weeping

The sun igniting sin

Life will be like a dreamer

True Love will only win.

 

Waiting for someone

to redeem them

to save and comfort them

Things will seem no longer fun

 

Heaven will be awaken

Bodies will be shaken

With echos returned

 

No one seems to have believed it

No one cared for it then

No one received it

 

All Lessons learned.

 

But underneath the covers

there eyes will discover

the path to seek the path to climb.

 

Where she will be there teaching

Where he will be there achieving

Leaving the world behind.

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