Lighting1 Posted April 9, 2009 Share Posted April 9, 2009 I wrote this at a time whe I felt like qutting. Just know patience is gold Keep chasing your dreams no matter what you’re told Even when it feels like you’re lost in the night Keep moving and never give up the fight Even on days where it hurts so much you have to cry Never give up and always keep your head to the sky Life gets hard many times with violence, poverty, war, and disease There just seems to be too many unhappy people to please Hungry kids starving and still not given food to eat I shed tears as bodies pile on the street Too many people are left alone to face the pain inside Then we wonder what would make one commit suicide People would rather seek money than help a person in need It’s hard being a decent person in a world full of greed Then we have crazy psychopaths that don’t think twice about blasting There is a huge shadow that suffering is casting All the haters in this world waiting for you to fail Innocent people locked up in jail Yeah it seems hopeless sometimes Even little kids fall victim to war crimes Don’t give in to the pain even if you’re at the end of the rope Dry your eyes and please don’t ever lose hope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
agburns84 Posted April 9, 2009 Share Posted April 9, 2009 That was fantastic. All of that is very true and something we can all feel and relate to every day. Thank you for sharing it with us, a brilliant and powerful poem. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lighting1 Posted April 9, 2009 Author Share Posted April 9, 2009 Thank you. It's a good feeling when I see that people can relate to any of my work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
live.ur.life Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 Your poem gave me goosebumps. It was very touching and oh so true. Keep writing poems like this...You have a gift. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 So true and very powerful I enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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