It Never Made It Right - Lyrics

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Hey, I posted this in my journal but i thought i'd see what you guys thought here too.Constructive comments would be lovelyyyy.

 

Mods if i cant have it in both places i'm sorry, i'll delete it from my journal, i wasn't sure if journals counted as posting it twice.

 

It Never Made It Right

 

So in this place that i call home,

I've learnt alot,

Of love and war.

And in this place of family trees,

I've made my way,

Through all the seas.

 

Because just because we want it,

Doesn't make it right,

And sometimes you think you've lost it,

When you never held it tight.

Does that make it right, (does that make it right).

It never made it right.

 

I heard your words,

They're still echoing in my memories,

Of good and bad and in-betweens,

I wonder if your words and eyes tell the same truth,

Because at times, (at times)

They seem to collide, To divide.

 

Because just because we want it,

Doesn't make it right,

And sometimes you think you've lost it,

When you never held it tight.

Does that make it right, (does that make it right).

It never made it right.

 

Perhaps the story lies beneath,

In the shadows,

Of the trees,

Perhaps the clutter of thoughts,

The noises of the mind,

Comes between the truth and I. (Between the truth and I)

 

Because just because we want it,

Doesn't make it right,

And sometimes you think you've lost it,

When you never held it tight.

Does that make it right, (does that make it right).

It never made it right.

 

And sometimes you think you've lost it, (you think you lost it),

When you never held it tight.

 

Does that make it right?

When you never held it tight.

It never made it right.

It never made it right.

[top bloke]

That is simply brilliant! I loved it....that just took me with it! It wasnt right darn it! They should have held it tight! Fantastic!

[redrose85]

I loved it too. I could "hear" it. It seems made for someone to sing it. Maybe Beyonce or J-Lo Great job!

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thanks to both of you! You're nice comments mean alot to mee.

[gypsy_girl]

thats awesome