xBlySSx Posted February 17, 2004 Share Posted February 17, 2004 adolecence suttle epics applauded by the legion Sorrow stalks me and the rain follows my every step listen to this harmony a simple beat that grabs your focus and sets you free Listen and Hear You want me to shut my ears deaf to pain Ignorance grips you by the neck die with cause as our age bares shame Indulge Indulge The burning flame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted February 17, 2004 Share Posted February 17, 2004 the rhythm seems to change throughout but you do have a beat to the poem which entices the reader to carry on. well me anyway. i thought it was a unique poem and interesting with how and what words you put together. i liked it. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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