Beoslasher Posted December 13, 2008 Share Posted December 13, 2008 I walked into a familiar room and saw a stranger there he sat quiet looking at me with a distant piecing stare "What's wrong my friend?" I ask concerned And he simply says "I've become a burden to the world." When I wake it isn't waking, but one step closer to the end. I walk alone always faking, believing that I'm real however, I'm so broken I can't even feel. I single tear rolls down his face and his lip begins to quiver I walk over to embrace him, but i bump into a mirror. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waveseer Posted December 13, 2008 Share Posted December 13, 2008 Nice, I like the cadence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adge Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 Love the ending! Very well thought out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 Darling, this is great piece, i really like it. Short but emotional Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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