Loki71 Posted November 24, 2008 Share Posted November 24, 2008 The pedals drop The leaves fall I sit here nothing at all Not moving Not thinking Wondering about it all How did I get here How did I become this troll Everything started out right Our future looked so bright The shine in your eye Now just faded washed away I gave you strength I helped you grow For that I should be happy But that was my down fall Now I wish you the best Your future so full I see the flower I helped grow But with a gust of wind That was my words I blew you away Never to return Please accept this as my goodbye and best wishes on everything you want from life. You deserve it. You trully are special. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
agburns84 Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 I'm surprised nobody has left a comment for your poem yet, so thought I'd write one myself. That was wonderfully written, sad but heart felt, something we can all relate to from time to time. Don't forget, with every goodbye there is another hello just around the corner. Again, I loved reading that, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa_gurl Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 Wowie! That is a beautifully sad poem. So much pain in the words....But Beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiredofvampires Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 Very moving and sensitive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ladybella Posted December 12, 2008 Share Posted December 12, 2008 that was a really good poem.lot of pain though ,sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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