Beoslasher Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 I am lonely but not alone unkempt, my hair short but long clean but messy my room is a disaster papers are scattered but i don't care I slide the clutter on my bed to make room to sleep I sleep on one side of a two sided bed live one side of a two sided life I close the curtains to shut out the sun I turn on fans because I'm too hot I put more blankets on because I'm too cold People worry because they don't see me but then ignore me when they do. I get phone calls when people want something and voice mail's when I call My mind it tends to wander to the places it shouldn't roam the loneliest place I have found is where I dwell the most So I packed my bags to travel except there were no bags to see because how can I run from something when it lives inside of me.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waveseer Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 You have described my inner life beautifully, thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiredofvampires Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 This is one of your best, ever, I think. The contradictions, I love them. Keep up this quality, it's first rate. And can I ever relate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfection Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 hey mate. this is brilliant stuff. keep writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redrose85 Posted November 27, 2008 Share Posted November 27, 2008 I agree with TOV. Best I've ever seen from you. I love love love this one It has emotion, it flows, others can relate to it. Great job beo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 29, 2008 Share Posted November 29, 2008 Wonderful dear. Its like you write the words of my heart in a way i never could. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beoslasher Posted December 1, 2008 Author Share Posted December 1, 2008 Wow, thanks for all the comments everyone! I'm touched, Sucks ya'll can relate to it though lol. it funny how life can be sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted December 1, 2008 Share Posted December 1, 2008 Magnificant. This is brilliant. If I close my eyes.... I can see you sitting on that side of a two sided bed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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