Beoslasher Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 So I was listening to a song, one that my last love and I liked, and I felt I wanted to write about the night I was sure I was in love with her, and got turned down =/, its a song by Kate Nash called Birds. (I know I'm a girl lol). This isnt much of a love poem but more of that desperation, and sadness =/ lol. Love and War We were walking under moonlight You mean the world to me I say with a smile, and I ponder a second to see what she may think She frowns, You really shouldn't she says, apathetic I am pathetic I am a soldier, tripping over wire, dodging shells of her attack I love her. I stammer, stuttering, my words tripping over wire I, uh.. Well its like, you..you are the only person who can make me nervous when I see you, talk to you...but uh, make me calm when I do talk, I love you ya know? Oh? she frowns I smile, confident, a shield, ignoring her, the mortars, the knowledge, common sense retreat. retreat. We continue our conversation she wants to go inside, I make her walk another lap, its such a lovely night her perfume is almost toxic, Side by side we walk, I should of just went home, but I'm not one to give up. The air is much too dry, and the sky is much too bright and her eyes shine like emeralds and my pride jumps over the moon I make my stand, the soldier the man, trying to defeat, I sneak for the attack but she counters with What about him? of course I am Jealous, I exclaim All I want is to understand you All I want is to understand me to she says I smile, an asinine smile a fake smile a defeated smile So we walk back to her house goodbyes, and truths You cant love me I wont let you. I wont tell you how I feel You don't love me Your lying You can't. I see how it hurts you I'm fine I say absorbing defeat my shields are down I'm crashing, I'm crashing. I walk home alone. I'm exiled a soldier no more I can't love now I couldn't feel then no one can understand no one can comprehend how I felt so I walk alone and I hear this song in my head I cursed this song I cursed her I cried I died I revived and I lied when I said I was fine all I wanted was for you to understand but I never lied when I said I was in love with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
floating_away Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 I like it. A really good emotionally descriptive story-like poem. Thanks for sharing, I feel the hurt when I'm reading it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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