After All This Time - Song

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Please note, i know its not exactly great. I dunno. I seem to fail miserably at writing anything at the moment. Perhaps my mind is too confused to get anything out that makes the slightest bit of sense. Who knows? But i thought i would post this anyway. Its my lame attempt at a song. Feel free to critize.

 

And sometimes I wonder,

Whether or not you mean what you say,

And sometimes I wonder,

Would the world just be better,

If I could slowly fade away?

And sometime I ponder,

Upon those broken shards of glass,

They reflect this heart of mine,

They reflect this heart of mine.

 

After all this time,

I still want to call you mine,

After all this time,

It still hurts knowing its her heart you make shine,

After all this time,

I wonder can I fade away?

But could I ever stay away?

 

I just wanna know,

Did you chose to hurt me so?

I just wanna know,

Why the hell did I let you go?

 

And after all this time,

I still want to call you mine,

After all this time,

It still hurts knowing its her heart you make shine,

After all this time,

I wonder can I fade away?

But could I ever stay away?

 

And after all this time,

I still want to call you mine,

After all this time,

It still hurts knowing its her heart you make shine,

After all this time,

I wonder can I fade away?

But could I ever stay away?

 

Yeah, Could I ever stay away?

[floating_away]

Very heartfelt words. I feel slightly better when I write out my feelings, I hope it helps you too.

[Beoslasher]

Can't criticize something I like =P

It's very good

you cant force yourself to write Broken =)

just write what you feel, thats the most beautiful thing of all

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thanks guys.

 

Beoslasher, i know i can't force myself to write. But sometimes i wish i could. Writing is something i cling too in bad times, when i get a writing block i feel so alone. Almost as if a friend has gone. Silly but true.

[Beoslasher]

Writing is something i cling too in bad times, when i get a writing block i feel so alone. Almost as if a friend has gone. Silly but true.

 

Oh, I know where your coming from, when that happens to me I want nothing less to rip my hair out lol. Writing is a good friend, it never argues with you, its like a like a silent listener as you vent on paper. Very good analogy btw. too me it isnt silly at all. =)

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Haha thankyou, im glad someone understands! Thats exactly it, its the one thing thats there when everything else turns its back. So thats why i get down when things dont come out right lol.