Divine_Malice Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 A sweet whisper, two words and I am gone. You lay your hand upon mine, with one knee to the ground. A question is asked, My answer is "yes." Tears being to fall, I am forever yours. A long lasting smile, I stand in the mirror in a long white gown. I walk down the aisle, a smile accross your face. A question is asked, My answer is "I do." Tears begin to fall, I am forever yours. A harsh long night, I sit by your side. The doctor walks in, No hope in sight. A question is asked, My answer is "pull it." Tears begin to fall, (As I whisper) I am forever yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hodgo Posted October 10, 2008 Share Posted October 10, 2008 im crying. thats amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beoslasher Posted October 10, 2008 Share Posted October 10, 2008 beautifully written The guy in me is fighting all those sappy sad/happy emotions ^_^ so that means your poem is very emotional and beautiful =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Divine_Malice Posted October 11, 2008 Author Share Posted October 11, 2008 Thank you. Yeah i think its one of my best pieces Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hodgo Posted October 13, 2008 Share Posted October 13, 2008 oh! i just read it again and it sent chills through me. i really love it. beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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