xxsupaxeroxx Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 I write alot of poems, and i saw some ppl posting a few poems, so i decided to give it a try,...let me know what u think...thanx -Stolen- The day that I first met you, I knew you were the one. I knew I'd come to love you, From this truth, I couldn't run. I didn't dare to hope, But yet I guess I had. For when you learned to love another, My heart just hurt so bad! I told my heart to give up, That my dreams could never come true. I fooled myself by thinking, That I had gotten over you. At first, it went as planned, For a time, I was just fine. 'Cuz you see, I kept my heart, Locked in its own little shrine. Then you came back in my life And I realized with a start, That before I knew what was happening, You had again stolen my heart. ok, now this girl knows ive liked her for a year now and she broke up with her bf, i asked her out and she said she will date me after i give her time,...thats basically what gave me inspiration for that poem,....let me know what u think, thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frodo Baggins Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 It's interesting. Heart-felt without being dramatic or "large scale;" I like it, keep 'em coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QTpie87 Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 i really like it. good work. love Qtpie87 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainswept Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 Good poem..me like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anamarie89 Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 Oh I love the ending so much! It just gave me the happy shivers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colonialfarmer Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 sad yet so true, what my whole post was about (cept a guy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 yep i enjoyed your poem, it was different for you to use the sense stole, but everything flowed, completely accurate to reality. im glad you have a chance with her, and i guess your heart never did stop loving *smiles* kel great poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dude123 Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 Great poem keep them coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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