dogwood Posted September 19, 2008 Share Posted September 19, 2008 i wrote it quick.. so its not hugely profound or anything night cigarette I light you and you burn red embers against the dark I inhale and with a crisp sound you are in my lungs through my body I feel sick tapping ashes watching your cherry so short lived night cigarette within minutes you're gone in me blanketing my hands my clothes with your scent I miss you now you're gone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellFrost666 Posted September 20, 2008 Share Posted September 20, 2008 Interesting take on a mundane subject. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dogwood Posted September 20, 2008 Author Share Posted September 20, 2008 it's metaphorical too.. and thanks? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellFrost666 Posted September 20, 2008 Share Posted September 20, 2008 it's metaphorical too.. and thanks? lol Yes. I meant that as a compliment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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