Dani0613 Posted September 12, 2008 Share Posted September 12, 2008 She stands firmly at attention, never to divert her stare, She exhibits the courage of a soldier, a soldier without fear. Her militant façade conceals what she doesn't want you to see, A wounded heart reluctant to love held captive by her uncertainty. Once marching in unison, holding her lover's unconditional hand, An abrupt 'about face' she's taken, 'at ease,' she's chosen to stand. Love's battlefield is covered with the remnants of where she's been, Camouflaged feelings mask what she's kept hidden deep within. With brevity and determination she emerges to conquer on her own, Determined to prove victorious detached from reinforcement and alone. Trained to fight the good fight, her ammunition always at her side, Aiming for her happiness; a target only this soldier can hit from inside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeremiah Johnson Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 That's really beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karma85 Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 she stands firmly at attention, never to divert her stare, she exhibits the courage of a soldier, a soldier without fear. Her militant façade conceals what she doesn't want you to see, a wounded heart reluctant to love held captive by her uncertainty. Once marching in unison, holding her lover's unconditional hand, an abrupt 'about face' she's taken, 'at ease,' she's chosen to stand. Love's battlefield is covered with the remnants of where she's been, camouflaged feelings mask what she's kept hidden deep within. With brevity and determination she emerges to conquer on her own, determined to prove victorious detached from reinforcement and alone. Trained to fight the good fight, her ammunition always at her side, aiming for her happiness; a target only this soldier can hit from inside. your poems amazeing and i luv it...very strong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani0613 Posted September 13, 2008 Author Share Posted September 13, 2008 THANK YOU GUYS, I really appreciate the positive feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karma85 Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 your wellcome any time loved the poem can u comment mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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