Colors

[Beoslasher]

Colors

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Love comes in colors

I believe this to be true

None of them are brighter

then when I think of you

 

I close my eyes and ponder

why your feelings changed

maybe I came on too strong

or we just went our separate ways

 

You still trust me with your deepest thoughts

the loves inside your mind

but the love I have for you

feels just like a crime

 

You've made your intentions very clear

and that I do respect

but when I cant stop thinking of you

its like a noose around my neck

 

I see you each and everyday

a smile burnt in my mind

I feel my arms wrap round your sides

and then i feel just fine

 

But as we walk alone at night

I try to turn and say

I still like you, wish you'd think this thru

but my thoughts give way to shame

 

Then we make our way back to your house

I muster one last stand

I'll tell you how I feel about you

Since beginning to the end

 

I try to pour my heart to you

but you just turn away

I guess it wasn't meant to be

loves colors dark today

[redrose85]

I really like the last few lines. I think you could somehow incorporate a bit more about colors, but other than that, it's really really good

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

I really really liked it. It was sad yet sweet.

 

I absolutely love the last verse also, its very touching, i also really liked the first one. You got me from the beginning, and i loved it through to the end

 

Lovely.