Like The First Time

[civilservant]

It feels like the first time,

I knew you were the one,

It feels like the first time,

I awoke with you to the sun,

Everytime it happened,

A part of me I gave,

Now no longer having the privilidge,

Forces me to be brave,

 

The sun still rises everyday,

Reminds me of the time,

That we were together, enjoying life,

Remembering is a crime,

When you came to work each day,

You smile always knocked me out,

But now I never see or hear you,

And it causes me to shout,

 

I know I love the idea of you,

Not who you truly are,

And my memory has created this being,

Brighter than the stars,

I shall forever remember your name,

From my heart it wont ever lift,

No matter how far away you are,

Or with who you now share that gift.

 

28/07/2008

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thats really beautiful. And very sad. I love it

 

P.S I also LOVE your avator

[civilservant]

Thanks for your king words Another, I'm glad you liked it.

 

Any other opinions? I'm always open to constructive criticism and would love to hear some opinions for improvment if anyone has any