comfyshoes Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 the grace in understanding is that I miss you differently it's an emptiness without longing like a shell left by the sea. it's an hollow without echo an unsat chair, an unslept bed it's the cemetery's silence as peace attends the dead. it's regret without remorse as fallen leaves will lose their green a yesterday without tomorrow for there's no today between. i miss you as a sorrow that is no longer kin to pain but stands in gentle stead of it as mist resembles rain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiredofvampires Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 This mirrors a feeling I have at present so closely, it's absolutely EERIE -- but how perfectly you've put it. Every line belongs, and the end...gives me a shiver. Simply wonderful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
itsallgrand Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 That is very beautiful. Enough said. Thank you for this today, comfy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A World Away Posted August 4, 2008 Share Posted August 4, 2008 Thoughts so well percieved. Thank you. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted August 4, 2008 Share Posted August 4, 2008 Elegant, eloquent, excellent. I'm heartened by what sounds for all the world like progression in healing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hodgo Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 thats really amazing and sent a shiver down my spine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
comfyshoes Posted August 19, 2008 Author Share Posted August 19, 2008 thank you all for your kind words. usually my poetic attempts suck. this just seemed to sum up how i'm feeling right now. it's just so spot on it gives me shivers when i read it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
civilservant Posted August 19, 2008 Share Posted August 19, 2008 Brilliant (Nuff said) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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