Hockey.Chick Posted July 30, 2008 Share Posted July 30, 2008 Oddly enough...this is my first poem posted on here...matches the title perfectly though I didn't intend that! The First Our first look, hands shaking, Hearts aching, longing For that first glance. Are you nervous? Just a bit... Looking in your eyes, The eyes that melt my soul. Our first touch, soft skin, Desires within, but withheld For the time. Hands exploring, are you nervous? Just a bit... Heart pounding, feeling your caress, The caress that sets me on fire. Our first kiss, lips synced, Passion linked, arms locked, For that moment in reality. Time has slowed to a halt, are you still nervous? Just a bit... Racing thoughts, the moment envelopes us, The moment that determines our destiny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hodgo Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A World Away Posted August 4, 2008 Share Posted August 4, 2008 That's so cute, also so real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hockey.Chick Posted August 5, 2008 Author Share Posted August 5, 2008 Thanks! I decided to change two words in it, but, I think it sounds good on here the way it is. That's exactly how it happened when I first saw my current boyfriend...months ago. Our firsts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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