Daddy Bear Posted July 22, 2008 Share Posted July 22, 2008 Felony I never thought that I would see that kind of brazen robbery You executed perfectly A wonderment of crime Felony I lie in chains no more to be a man whose heart beats quietly And ain't that just the irony for if you brought it back to me it still would not be mine And what did you get? What did you get for your larceny? A handful of coins thirty or so bright and silvery? Did you exchange for a handful of change something more precious, my dear? For a heart can be gold but a heart can be sold and formed into rings for a nose and an ear Oh, Felony I can't describe the misery My nights alone agony I still love you, Felony So slowly goes the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel_baby Posted July 22, 2008 Share Posted July 22, 2008 DB I love reading your poems. You have a way with words. Keep writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A World Away Posted July 22, 2008 Share Posted July 22, 2008 I love the way that flows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiredofvampires Posted July 22, 2008 Share Posted July 22, 2008 Simple, but not simple. Elegant. Otherwise, all I can say is...I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted July 23, 2008 Author Share Posted July 23, 2008 Thanks, thanks and thanks. Just a hind paw note here: I can't rightly hold anyone other than myself responsible for the real-life events that spawned this little doohickey. Bears are feeling critters, though, and I definitely do feel like my heart's been swiped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiredofvampires Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 I definitely do feel like my heart's been swiped. And yet...it doesn't seem to be missing, in that you still have so much of it to go around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted July 23, 2008 Author Share Posted July 23, 2008 And yet...it doesn't seem to be missing, in that you still have so much of it to go around. Ha, don't believe the hype. I only put up this Gingerbrot-Haus to lure chubby Kinder into mein stewpot. *sharpens knives together* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiredofvampires Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 I be num nums then, soon! *pops thumb in mouth* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balbina Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 I really like it. You've very talented with putting words together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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