darkness1235 Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 Ok, well , I actually wrote this about a month ago... erm, dunno if its good though... As my nail jams into my skin Grazing softly As I grin Seeing comfort came to me once again Taking pills to kill the pain Though it's all just in my head I still hope for that time When it's all gone Staring boldly at the mrror Watching the tears fall down my cheeks Creating the rivers I feared to drown in Once Again Drowning out my screams in music Hiding my pain under my clothes Faking a smile so the tears don't come once more Bite my lips and pull my hair As I lay there on the floor Contemplating the ceiling I jam my nail once more Now I sit there in disappointment Wishing it all goes away I just close my eyes and say I survived another day... -TATY- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 Thats a really strong piece. It said pretty much how i feel lately. Never doubt poetry is good. If it means something to you thats all that matters. I think you should post some more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness1235 Posted May 4, 2008 Author Share Posted May 4, 2008 thanks, it does mean, a lot actually... I might actually post a bit more... if I can find it, have no idea where I put my poems. but thx =D -TATY- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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