Bella4455 Posted April 24, 2008 Share Posted April 24, 2008 It is in Spanish. At this moment my feelings are simply better conveyed that way. I can add the translation if any one wants. I added the translation at the bottom. El Ruido ¿Qué es ese ruido? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Me estoy haciendo pedazos. ¿Qué es ese olor? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Dentro, me estoy muriendo despacio. ¿Qué es esa oscuridad? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Mi alma está emitiendo un chillado. ¿Qué es esta frialdad? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Me estoy desmoronando. ¿Qué es este vacío? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Estoy desapareciendo. The English Translation The Noise What is that sound? Ssshhh, it’s just me, Coming apart at the seams. What is that smell? Ssshhh, it’s just me, Slowly dying inside. What is this darkness? Ssshhh, it’s just me, My soul is screaming. What is this chill? Ssshhh, it’s just me, Crumbling. What is this emptiness? Ssshhh, it’s just me Lost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jengh Posted April 24, 2008 Share Posted April 24, 2008 ohhh, i like it =) i wrote a poem in spanish awhile back too...can't remember what i did with it. Spanish,to me, is such a beautiful and romantic sounding language. You could be talking about the worst things and it still sounds good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
isuck Posted April 24, 2008 Share Posted April 24, 2008 It is in Spanish. At this moment my feelings are simply better conveyed that way. I can add the translation if any one wants. El Ruido ¿Qué es ese ruido? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Me estoy haciendo pedazos. ¿Qué es ese olor? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Dentro, me estoy muriendo despacio. ¿Qué es esa oscuridad? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Mi alma está emitiendo un chillado. ¿Qué es esta frialdad? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Me estoy desmoronando. ¿Qué es este vacío? Sshhh, Soy solamente yo. Estoy desapareciendo. if this poem conveys your feelings, why are you feeling that way? anything wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bella4455 Posted April 24, 2008 Author Share Posted April 24, 2008 long story. Writing this helped. It is strange, my spoken Spanish often feels clumsy to me, but writing seems to flow better than English right now. I am working on a couple others right now. For the moment they are my therapy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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