upset and hurt Posted February 25, 2008 Share Posted February 25, 2008 plz be nice didnt like doin this in shool but i thought of this after splittin from my gf. Let me know what you think, thanks. I just woke from a deep dream wishing you would come to me, Open arms smile so wide you grab my body by the side, You kiss my lips and look so sweet I let you sit down on my seat, You look at me and get a quiver you say you love me i get a shiver, I wrap my arms around you tight and hold you till the morning light. Still thinking of sending this to my ex what do you nice people think??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amure Posted February 25, 2008 Share Posted February 25, 2008 good poem man dont send it though lol i write my ex songs/poems out her ears. it only makes them disrespect you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicguy Posted February 25, 2008 Share Posted February 25, 2008 not bad, not bad. I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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