musicguy Posted February 16, 2008 Share Posted February 16, 2008 Sweet are your lips against mine, tastes so good, wet like wine. Your eyes are the heaven in which I lie, as beautiful as the bluest sky. Your voice is calming, sweet and soothing, the way I feel about you, a love that's true. You're there for me, I'm there for you, as the best boyfriend that I can be. You're my rock, my dream, my everything. Musicguy ©Feb. 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hosswhispra Posted February 16, 2008 Share Posted February 16, 2008 I love reading your poetry, MG. I especially love the third and fourth line of your first stanza: Your eyes are the heaven in which I lie, as beautiful as the bluest sky. Then for this: Sweet are your lips against mine, tastes so good, wet like wine I think I would go with: Sweet are your lips against mine, tastes so good, like the finest merlot..... What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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