zestygirl Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 Being entwined.... so different so dangerous And not like being in love, But being aligned, heart to mind - Eyes to soul, breath to breath to breath. But a tangled affair, whether passioned or fair... is tangle, is a mess. A knot takes it's toll, is indifferent, to circumstance or emotion. A knot knows it's role - It knows only to bind, regardless of kind - will bind to death, to death to death... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stu147 Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 Awesomely written. If this is your poem you should be very proud of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
itsallgrand Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 Whoa! Perfect timing for me. Said so well. Thank you for sharing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pixieface Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 I can see where you're coming from. It's a very meaningful poem. It's about being trapped in a relationship, right? I like it a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zestygirl Posted January 27, 2008 Author Share Posted January 27, 2008 Thank you. I did write this...it's where I feel I am many days. It's nice to know others relate....Do we all feel like this at certain times? As though the love has become secondary to the fact that we are so much a part each other that either of us could get away with so much more than we should - simply because our addiction to one another is so deep and irrevocable? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hosswhispra Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 Awesome writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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