There's nothing left of me

[musicguy]

My heart is crumbling

my soul is dying.

darkness all around me

even when the sun shines.

I can't help but feel this way.

when I feel it everyday.

So alone,

so empty.

I'm losing control of what I used to feel

when I was a young boy.

the smiles,

the laughter,

the sheer happiness.

has now faded away.

I wish it was different.

I wish I felt the way I did back then.

It's so hard to change the way I feel now.

[Jeen]

Thanks. musicguy

 

When I read the words and I look at the photo of me and friends on my dressing table. I get a lump in my throat and a tear in my eye for the words you have written are so true. I don't see any of them any more and when I look in the mirror I see how old I have become, and out of the conner of my eye I can see there is only my clothes and stuff in this room. ( Only my perfume in the air )

 

Your poetry is so close to my hart and feelings.

 

I do love your poems.

 

Jeen

[musicguy]

awww! Thank you. I just write from the heart

[alcide]

My heart is crumbling

my soul is dying.

darkness all around me

even when the sun shines.

I can't help but feel this way.

when I feel it everyday.

So alone,

so empty.

I'm losing control of what I used to feel

when I was a young boy.

the smiles,

the laughter,

the sheer happiness.

has now faded away.

I wish it was different.

I wish I felt the way I did back then.

It's so hard to change the way I feel now.

 

Very true of my exact feeling right now

[musicguy]

Very true of my exact feeling right now

 

you were a young boy?