reisforpeace Posted December 11, 2007 Share Posted December 11, 2007 This is a sonnet that I wrote, please give me some constructive criticism... ------------------------------------ Just Out of My Reach Love is just out of my reach I lift my hand and it flutters away Why won’t love land and stay? I need it to heal my chest’s only breach To learn from love so then I can teach New love will replace the old they always say Well what if it doesn’t work that way? Love is hardly as sweet as a peach. Perhaps you are right before me So close that I can’t even see. To nervous to come when I call. But be brave my love, stand up tall. Bring faith to those who have lost hope There still is time to help them cope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gryphon Posted December 12, 2007 Share Posted December 12, 2007 I honestly think its beautiful. It made me smile, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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