musicguy Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Screaming inside, tearing me from within, shadows lurk behind me. Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide. You left me torn and shattered, bruised and battered. loss of hope or happiness. wondering who you are now where did the old you go? Broken hearted shattered soul, but I'll be back, better than ever, better than you'll ever be. The strong survive musicguy©2007 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeen Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Don't know what to say but WoW. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicguy Posted December 2, 2007 Author Share Posted December 2, 2007 Don't know what to say but WoW. Thanks Why thank you. What do you think my poem is about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeen Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Getting control of your emotions and feelings, and learning from them to be a stronger person in life. I hope?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicguy Posted December 2, 2007 Author Share Posted December 2, 2007 Yup, that's right! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeen Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 I do love your poems. I can relate to sow many of them but it is hard to sometimes put it in words and thank you after you did such a good job in writing them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicguy Posted December 2, 2007 Author Share Posted December 2, 2007 awwww!! thank you. I've been writing poetry since I was in 14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeen Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 I do love your poems. I can relate to sow many of them but it is hard to sometimes put it in words and thank you after you did such a good job in writing them. My computer have a mind of it's own and had to post this post again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicguy Posted December 2, 2007 Author Share Posted December 2, 2007 hehe, it's okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dqueen Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Yes, never let the enemy win. As they say, living well is the best revenge. Brilliant poem! Thanks for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CallingAllAngels Posted March 1, 2008 Share Posted March 1, 2008 another excellent poem...especially like the 2nd verse..... ~Allie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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