InvisibleWound Posted November 27, 2007 Share Posted November 27, 2007 In another time we held each other like there was no end Just me and you together in a place that doesn't exist to their peeping eyes We are closed in around a field of love and it continues growing even after we are gone from its surrounding I remember our last day together It was the first time we kissed and felt so free All I wanted was to hold your hand and feel the joy of love But then she seen us and grabbed you from me That was the last day I seen you I laid there for hours hugging myself wishing you were here You kept whispering that someday we would be able to walk around the world Love each other without jealousy and all the bad things that come with love and regret Even though I can't see you now I know we will always have feelings strong forever And when we finally see each other again I know our love will grow again and again Dedicated To: Patrick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stu147 Posted November 27, 2007 Share Posted November 27, 2007 I really like this poem. I think there is some strong imagery there, and a whole lot of emotion. Good work in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InvisibleWound Posted November 28, 2007 Author Share Posted November 28, 2007 Thank you so much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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