lil_baby_girl Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 Baby if you love me tell me dont be afried I wont hurt you like eveyone else if you wanna be mine go for it if you wanna go back its fine with me ill wait right here for your reply I love you with all my heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess_summer_blue84 Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 Wow! That's very good! How about this: Wishes If I could have my wishes and if wishes did come true I would wish for a long life for you If I could have my wish and if wishes did come true I would wish for you a safe journey If I could have my wishes and if wishes did come true I would wish for protection for you and makes sure your ok. If I could have my wishes and if wishes did come true I would wish for the moon, the sky , and the stars and give them all to you. I have written this poem and it is poblished at link removed I have won a lot of poetry contest! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeen Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 Thank you lil baby girl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lil_baby_girl Posted November 23, 2007 Author Share Posted November 23, 2007 Hey princess_summer_blue84 thats a really good poem, i have poblished a lot on link removed i have not won anything yet, but im not givine up i know my work is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess_summer_blue84 Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 Thanks! keep trying and u will ! I promise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lil_baby_girl Posted November 23, 2007 Author Share Posted November 23, 2007 thanks princess_summer_blue84 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess_summer_blue84 Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 Your Welcome! Anytime! Just write about how u feel and it will all come to u . I promise try going out side and writing poems it seems to help me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lil_baby_girl Posted November 24, 2007 Author Share Posted November 24, 2007 ok ill try it somtimes, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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