Caesium Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 I haven't posted on this forum in about 2 years. Yet it's still my fave forum. Here's a little song i wrote. It's still a working progress, any feedback is welcome. I do have a guitar tune for this song, I just can't sing so i ain't gonna record it Verse All These feelings we've had Have lasted so long now But it's over again But it's over now. Chorus And Your lost at sea now I can see you swimming from me Baby, can't you see What i need , is real. Verse Standing behind glass Watch you fade and pass And all that's left to say Is how you want me to stay Ending And you swim away now And you swim away And you swim away now And you swim away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RayKay Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 Reminds me of something like David Gray would do....particularly some of his older stuff. Would be good with the right voice and tune Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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