afrodave Posted November 15, 2007 Share Posted November 15, 2007 falling has ended, surface I've hit it seems this fall has ended too quick floating here I wonder why I jumped from my brdige up so high maybe for one lasting quick thrill sinking here I wonder still if I should have done things differently too late right now, or so it seems my bridge was built for me up there crossing the bridge, too much to bear and so I decided instead to fall what's the point in bearing it all a bridge was made for me to cross some consider a gain...I a loss it may be sad to sink so far down I, right here, am happy to drown. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sandyv Posted November 15, 2007 Share Posted November 15, 2007 Afro.... very beautiful, and sad.... and I could have written it by the words I see there.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afrodave Posted November 15, 2007 Author Share Posted November 15, 2007 and I could have written it by the words I see there.... Is that a compliment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sandyv Posted November 15, 2007 Share Posted November 15, 2007 Yes its a compliment, just saying I feel what you've written in your poem.... very much.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afrodave Posted November 15, 2007 Author Share Posted November 15, 2007 Oh thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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