AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 6, 2007 Share Posted November 6, 2007 I wish you could read my thoughts, See the pain that you have caused me, I could never tell you myself, But I wish you could see. You take away everyone I fall for, And I let you because I adore you, Its sad fact, But it’s so true. This time you’ve done it, You’ve shattered my heart, I guess I should have seen it coming, I should have guessed it from the start. I swore I’d never fall for another, After last time was such heartbreak, All because of you, Maybe I need to be fake. Maybe if I could be, Just a bit skinnier, Just a bit smarter, Just a bit prettier. Maybe people could see me, Because when I’m near you, No one sees past you, I wish you wouldn’t do the things you do. But I love you to much to confront you, I adore you so much I can’t leave you, I miss you so much when you’re gone, I only with these emotions were gone. One day I’ll get the courage to sleep forever, Then maybe you will see past your self, Until then my hidden pains, Are kept on a secret bookshelf. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel_baby Posted November 6, 2007 Share Posted November 6, 2007 Love the poem, well written. I can feel the pain and distraught from the words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 6, 2007 Author Share Posted November 6, 2007 Thankyou muchly.. kinda got some news that upset me so i took it out it words.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted November 6, 2007 Share Posted November 6, 2007 Very expressive ABD, another piece I'm proud to say I LOVE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicguy Posted November 7, 2007 Share Posted November 7, 2007 I love it!! Great poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 7, 2007 Author Share Posted November 7, 2007 Thanks Sarey, You always make me smile. Music guy getting a comment from you makes me feel so proud because your work is always so expressive. Thank you both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicguy Posted November 7, 2007 Share Posted November 7, 2007 Thanks Sarey, You always make me smile. Music guy getting a comment from you makes me feel so proud because your work is always so expressive. Thank you both you have expressive poetry too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 8, 2007 Author Share Posted November 8, 2007 Thankyou, you made me smile Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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